Peer critique
The structure of your story was fine. It was clear and well thought out. I was kind of confused on the first part because the main character does not state who they are. Do not assume people who read your story know who the character is and what background they come from. The story was nice and interesting. You need to work on some grammar and punctuation errors. The audience of the story is also very clear. The meaning of the story is kind of confusing, maybe it is because I'm not much of a fan to read teen romance stories, but to me it was quite confusing. The voice/tone was correctly stated by each different character may it be in third person or first person. The evidence provided shows that you know how each and every character acts because there are people who gets their characters mixed up sometimes. Overall your story was very interesting and I enjoyed reading it.
